EDIT age meme - girl Hiccup

-EDIT-

edited version of this : [link]

with paler skin more true to the Hiccup character (on the other version, the skin is far too tan. Ah, Hiccup, you pale little fishbone XD )

and eyelights! because I'm a doink and forgot them on the last version *headdesk* Please excuse my failure at life.

now, for those of you who have no flippin' idea what I'm talking about, here is the drescription from the I-fail-at-life version:

An age meme i found a while back. i don't know who the creator is, BUT THIS IS NOT MY MEME.
Ahem, anyway.
I wanted to do this as a character development thing. I'm currently in the process of writing a fan fiction of HTTYD, where I change hiccup into a girl. The name stays the same, s do the character traits, but I wanted to kind of do an in-depth, my-own-spin-on-things fanfic. But that's probably not what you're curious about.

in the first panel, we see Hiccup at five, when Valhallarama was still around. (she's the close-up woman). Adorable, carefree, happy.
in panel 2, hiccup at ten. shortly after another dragon raid, and Hiccup has come out a little worse for the wear. You can see a large chunk of hair is burnt off, and there are several scratches visible. Also, due to body language, it is clear that Hiccup's life has taken a turn for the worse since the first panel.

panel three - during/right after my fanfic. Hiccup about the sae age as movie-hiccup, this time with Tooothless1 HI TOOTHLESS!!!! she's much happier here, obviously

panel four - Hiccup at twenty. her hair is grown out, and she wears a fur cape much like Stoick's. She's a cheif-in-training here, or perhaps she has let someone else train to be leader while she explores the world with Toothless. I'd love to hear your'e input on this last situation. tell me which one seems more likely to you!

And that's it. I'd love to hear any feedback, please!